Really strong! A few could use more emphasis on the designers use of typography rather than form: laszlo moholy-nagy (great treatment of his name but the forms, as strong as they are in representing his visual form, could be replaced with his typographic form. Herman Zapf’s information is excellent. The Zapf panel could benefit from better use of space; it is a tad too even. Work a bit more with leading to define the different information chunks. MG is fabulous. Kate Moross cold use more range of word choices than name repetition.
These are all so beautiful. Very simplistic looking but they all give off a very sophisticated feel. I do think some of the designs need to hone in to the typography work of these designers just because of the project description.
I really enjoyed this project and I think you did a really good job at tying them all together. Even though they showcase different designers, each design looks like it could stand alone but they also work together very well in one system. Good job!
Really strong! A few could use more emphasis on the designers use of typography rather than form: laszlo moholy-nagy (great treatment of his name but the forms, as strong as they are in representing his visual form, could be replaced with his typographic form. Herman Zapf’s information is excellent. The Zapf panel could benefit from better use of space; it is a tad too even. Work a bit more with leading to define the different information chunks. MG is fabulous. Kate Moross cold use more range of word choices than name repetition.
ReplyDeleteThese are all so beautiful. Very simplistic looking but they all give off a very sophisticated feel. I do think some of the designs need to hone in to the typography work of these designers just because of the project description.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this project and I think you did a really good job at tying them all together. Even though they showcase different designers, each design looks like it could stand alone but they also work together very well in one system. Good job!
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