Beautiul design! Enschede needs some examples as you include on your other pages; also the designer’s name is too tightly letter-spaced.
If a given typeface does not have a designer or year (France or Geneva), I would indicate that in someway. E.G., designer unknown, date unknown, etc. Otherwise it looks like you forgot that information.
The rules on Ibarra do not work as well as the other pages.
Quebec secondary typography is much larger than the pages preceding it. Same with Uji, the similar kinds of information should be treated in the same or similar way from one page to the next. Also check letter-spacing on headlines from one page to the next.
I think your use of colors, typefaces, and lines all work really well together. All of these elements balance the information on the page making the layout readable and beautiful to look at. My favorite of your designs is Ottawa because of the color and the repetition of lines. Nice job!
I love this, the consistency you achieved in your designs despite all the separate pages being different is awesome. It is easy to read and I can clearly understand what you are trying to get across. Great job!!
Beautiul design!
ReplyDeleteEnschede needs some examples as you include on your other pages; also the designer’s name is too tightly letter-spaced.
If a given typeface does not have a designer or year (France or Geneva), I would indicate that in someway. E.G., designer unknown, date unknown, etc. Otherwise it looks like you forgot that information.
The rules on Ibarra do not work as well as the other pages.
Quebec secondary typography is much larger than the pages preceding it. Same with Uji, the similar kinds of information should be treated in the same or similar way from one page to the next. Also check letter-spacing on headlines from one page to the next.
I think your use of colors, typefaces, and lines all work really well together. All of these elements balance the information on the page making the layout readable and beautiful to look at. My favorite of your designs is Ottawa because of the color and the repetition of lines. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI love this, the consistency you achieved in your designs despite all the separate pages being different is awesome. It is easy to read and I can clearly understand what you are trying to get across. Great job!!
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