I appreciate the variety of approaches in this project. However you are relying too much on illustration. Remember that we have extensively discussed that illustrations can only be constructed out of typographic elements except for minimal, restrained use of patterns. As I have mentioned in other feedback posts, in an advanced typography class, you need to focus on refined typographic development. There should be a clear use of repetitive typographic form from one panel to the next or very similar typography that holds the work together from one panel to the next. It is a helpful strategy to both the designer and the reader. I suggest that you limit your selection of fonts a bit more and that will aid in this effort. Also similar sizes from one panel to the next will help with coherence and unity. Feel free to post updates before completing the project. You can take as long as you wish though will need to keep up with other assignment.
I appreciate the variety of approaches in this project. However you are relying too much on illustration. Remember that we have extensively discussed that illustrations can only be constructed out of typographic elements except for minimal, restrained use of patterns. As I have mentioned in other feedback posts, in an advanced typography class, you need to focus on refined typographic development. There should be a clear use of repetitive typographic form from one panel to the next or very similar typography that holds the work together from one panel to the next. It is a helpful strategy to both the designer and the reader. I suggest that you limit your selection of fonts a bit more and that will aid in this effort. Also similar sizes from one panel to the next will help with coherence and unity. Feel free to post updates before completing the project. You can take as long as you wish though will need to keep up with other assignment.
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