Looks good. Re-rag your text so that you eliminate widows and awkward breaks in the information, helping to make readability and form stronger. In a couple cases you are including screenshots of your files. You could make the presentation stronger with minimal effort by circling part of a letter or pointing to an element that you are discussing. "Weight" is a too tightly kerned. It is an interesting display typeface but hard to read in text.
I like the concept and colors used for this project, but I feel like the color block on the bottom has a lot of weight and should either be made smaller or the rest of the elements moved down? I'm not sure if you were planning on putting something else down there, but otherwise I think the design is good!
Looks good. Re-rag your text so that you eliminate widows and awkward breaks in the information, helping to make readability and form stronger. In a couple cases you are including screenshots of your files. You could make the presentation stronger with minimal effort by circling part of a letter or pointing to an element that you are discussing. "Weight" is a too tightly kerned. It is an interesting display typeface but hard to read in text.
ReplyDeleteI like the concept and colors used for this project, but I feel like the color block on the bottom has a lot of weight and should either be made smaller or the rest of the elements moved down? I'm not sure if you were planning on putting something else down there, but otherwise I think the design is good!
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