Here is the final version of my ABC type product labels! I kept the color to a minimum, using it as accents where it seemed to fit. I like that each one is different and reflects the feeling of the typeface
Beautiful! Refined and carefully constructed. A couple of panels could use a bit of tweaking. The type size for Paul Renner, designer of Futura, is too large in fitting well with the rest of the panels. John Doe, Nassim and Whitman seem to require a bit more information or rules treatment to fit as well together as the rest. Yanan is very different in it's vertical arrangement. I would revisit these to see if they can be improved without too much additional effort. Really strong work.
Your idea was one of my favorites I saw in the class. I think you executed it so well, and I really get the sense of it being fancy labels. They are all so different and minimal, and it works perfect. They all work so amazing in just black and white! If you you wanted to add a touch of color, I think it would still look awesome, but B & W works perfect! Awesome job.
I feel as though they are all very different yet they all fit together as a collection as a whole. Nice work with making them interesting without only stroke weights, simple color, and typography.
I love the label concept you chose to work with. I am a sucker for anything packaged with labels that look like these so your work drew my attention. The typefaces and the shape of each label work well and make your project really beautiful.
Beautiful! Refined and carefully constructed. A couple of panels could use a bit of tweaking. The type size for Paul Renner, designer of Futura, is too large in fitting well with the rest of the panels. John Doe, Nassim and Whitman seem to require a bit more information or rules treatment to fit as well together as the rest. Yanan is very different in it's vertical arrangement. I would revisit these to see if they can be improved without too much additional effort. Really strong work.
ReplyDeleteYour idea was one of my favorites I saw in the class. I think you executed it so well, and I really get the sense of it being fancy labels. They are all so different and minimal, and it works perfect. They all work so amazing in just black and white! If you you wanted to add a touch of color, I think it would still look awesome, but B & W works perfect! Awesome job.
ReplyDeleteI feel as though they are all very different yet they all fit together as a collection as a whole. Nice work with making them interesting without only stroke weights, simple color, and typography.
ReplyDeleteI love the label concept you chose to work with. I am a sucker for anything packaged with labels that look like these so your work drew my attention. The typefaces and the shape of each label work well and make your project really beautiful.
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