Wren Lively - Final ABCs

EDIT: I updated this submission with corrections!

I decided to go with the gradient idea, and I went with this transparent type with a sort of vibrating look. I thought that the transparent circle worked well as a way to establish the definition of each term.




























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  1. Wonderful project. Make sure you re-rag to eliminate any widows and awkward line breaks. Occasionally your text information is too close to the edge of the page. The information should be consistent with an initial cap or always lower case.

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  2. I really like overall aesthetic of your design, the simplicity and use of negative space is great. I do think that having some of the letters being cut off, the lowercase g in particular, feels a little out of place to me. I also think it might be better to change the color of the circle you use to highlight different parts of the letter, sometimes it covers too much of the letter, lowercase c in this case.

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