Please post your mood board. It's hard to provide feedback without it. At present, the white type is hard to read against the background. And the value between the blue back and black type is a bit close. The timeline text runs into the inside folds on both inside margins of the spread, and the type is generally too tight to the white boxes in the Timeline. The empty space in the center of the yellow right-hand spread is not balancing the facing page... the treatment of the photo is interesting... would have to see if that is a standard treatment or not. Would like to see more examples of this treatment.
Please post your mood board. It's hard to provide feedback without it. At present, the white type is hard to read against the background. And the value between the blue back and black type is a bit close. The timeline text runs into the inside folds on both inside margins of the spread, and the type is generally too tight to the white boxes in the Timeline. The empty space in the center of the yellow right-hand spread is not balancing the facing page... the treatment of the photo is interesting... would have to see if that is a standard treatment or not. Would like to see more examples of this treatment.
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